tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7945541362208191921.post5168792736868597892..comments2012-12-04T22:08:55.324-06:00Comments on Ashley Snow`s EDM310 Class Blog: Blog Post #3Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11472383287993915476noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7945541362208191921.post-36237328202911060372012-09-23T10:39:36.025-05:002012-09-23T10:39:36.025-05:00You completed all of the portions of the assignmen...You completed all of the portions of the assignment on time, and your links and photos look great. However, I would suggest that you proofread your post before you publish it. I would also watch your word choice throughout your post. Another thing you need to do is add more detail to your post. You made many general statements about each section, and in some instances, you didn’t give any examples. The second paragraph of your post is one example of where you could have added more detail.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7945541362208191921.post-24696737081727685482012-09-20T07:44:20.612-05:002012-09-20T07:44:20.612-05:00I ave removed the above post to correct four typos...I ave removed the above post to correct four typos which it originally contained.<br /><br />Your post can be improved with specific examples. For example, you write: "The video Writing Peer Review Top Ten Mistakes is a great video for all ages, because I believe anyone can relate to the different labels of peer editing. The videos and slide were all helpful in their own ways. The videos definitely taught me how to peer edit better. Peer editing can be tough, but after watching the videos and viewing the slide I believe I will do a better job."<br /><br />What were "the different labels of peer editing"? Be specific. Give examples. In addition, I do not think labels is the appropriate word here - maybe types?<br /><br />How were the video and slides (not slide) helpful? We have one specific answer from you: they taught you how to "peer edit better". Anything else? And specifically, what did you learn? <br /><br />Another example: " It is amazing to see what Lacey Cook is doing with technology in her classroom." What specifically is she doing? You need examples, not generalities.<br /><br />"Technology has changed a lot of teachers teaching strategies to make lectures more interesting." Really? In what way? By adding slides? Another question: Do you think this is the argument being made by the author of these videos and commentaries? <br /><br />"Technology needs to be taught to students` to broaden their knowledge." Was Vicki Davis talking about teaching technology? Or using technology to learn? Those are two very different things. I hope you understand the difference.John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7945541362208191921.post-715656880419768572012-09-20T07:39:20.037-05:002012-09-20T07:39:20.037-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com